Friday, May 8, 2009

What's wrong with para 4?

3 comments:

Unknown said...

i am not quite sure by i think that the 'should there be a need to' shold be taken out.

Asy said...

Instead of using the phrase 'will be conducting a', use 'will conduct a'.

Jiayi said...

The phrase "should there be a need to,"the comma should be change to a fullstop and "our school" the "our" must change to capital "O' to fit it in.
After changes...

...resume the temperature-taking regimet,should there be a need to.Our school will be conducting a temperature-taking....