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Good piece. Keep it up. Paragraph your speeches. Watch your punctuation when using direct speeches.
1. pondering over something
2. peered into the bush
3. He stammered, his voice barely a whisper
4. Its leg was injured and was bruised and battered.
5. I crouched down and scooped the puppy into my arms, cradling it.
6. My hopes were shattered
7. a furious struggle with my emotions
8. I nodded gravely
9. choked with emotions
1. "A... a rustling sound." He stammered.
2. Jack smiled and said "We should bring it to a vet. There is one beside my block."
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2 comments:
which one is mistake up or down?
1."A...a rustling sound," he stammered.
2.Jack smiled and said,"We should bring it to a vet.There is a veterinarian clinic beside my block. we can go there."
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