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Some loops in the story. Needs more information so that readers will not be confused. Many careless mistakes in Grammar.
1. grinning slyly
1. pleading and whinning
2. run the whole stretch covered by forest park
3. I could here voices.
4. Sweats trickled down.
5. spectecles
6. Questions were racing around my brain.
7.It was a muscular men.
8. The stout little men.
9. How could I forgot?
10. has pass
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9 comments:
1)pleading and whining
2)ran the whole stretch covered by forest park
3)i can hear voices
5)spectecles
6)Questions were racing in my brain
7) it was a muscular man
8)the stout little man
9)how could i forget
10)have pass
still incorrect for 5 and 10.
5. spectacles
10. has passed
spectacles
has passed.(10)
grammar is noun is it? or else why need capital G
1.pleading and whining
2.ran the whole stretch covered by forest park
3.i heard voices
4.sweat trickled down
5.spectacles
6.questions were racing through my brain
7.he was a muscular man
8.the stout little man
9.how could i forget?
10.has passed
1)pleading and whining
2)ran the whole stretch covered by forest park
3)i can hear voices
4)Sweat trickled down
5)spectacles
6)Questions were racing in my brain
7) it was a muscular man
8)the stout little man
9)how could i forget
10)has passed
1. pleading and whining
2. ran the whole stretch covered by forest park
3. i can here voices
4. beads of sweat trickled down
5. spectacles
6. Questions were racing in my brain
7. It was a muscular men.
8. The stout little man
9. How could i forget?
10. has passed
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