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Writer is capable of creating a fine story line but has to consciously work on improving her grammar. There are more than 10 mistakes made in tenses.
1. I recalled what happen that day.
2. That day, he ride so fast.
3. Insted
4. I reach for my handphone but could not find.
5. Do you need me to sent him to the hospital?
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1. i recalled what happened that day.
2. that day, he rode so fast.
3. instead
4. i reach for my hand phone but could not want me to sent him to the hospital?
1.I recalled what happened that day.
2.That day,he rode so fast.
3.Instead
4.I reach for my handphone but I could not find it.
5.Do you need me to send him to the hospital?
-I recalled what happen that day.
-That day, he rode so fast.
-Instead
-I reach for my hand phone but could not find.
-Do you need me to send him to the hospital?
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