C 15 L 13
Fluent and relatively well developed. A pleasant read. However, I find it not very realistic for the writer feel relieved at the end of the story after witnessing the death of a cyclist.
Good Vocab
1. screeching of brakes
2. thrust off his bicycle
3. blood was seen fowing out from his temple
4. his bicycle was hurled a distance away
5. this petrifying sight
6. took the chance to escape
Mistakes
1. laid still on the ground
2. passer-bys
3. tried to assit them
4. heaved a sigh of relieve
5. The crowd was soon dismissed from the scene.
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-heaved a sigh of relif
-passers-by
-tried to assist them
-lie still on the ground
-The crowd soon dispersed from the scene
1. lie still on the ground.
2. passers by
3. tried to assist them
1.Lay still on the ground.
2.Passers-by
3.Tried to assist them.
4.Heaved a sigh of relief.
-Laid still on the ground
-Passer-bys
-Tried to assist them
-Heaved a sigh of relieve
-The crowd was soon dismissed from the scene.
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