C 15 L 13
A good piece with appropriate use of vocabulary. Writer should aim at writing a piece free from spelling and grammar mistakes. Adequate elaboration of the act of the thief and how he was nabbed.
Good voacb
1. I replied, exasperated
2. swivelled her head
3. snapped back into reality
4. chided
Mistakes
1. I was too shock to react
2. valueables
3. an indeliable memory
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5 comments:
-Valuables
-An indelible memory
1. I am too schock to react.
2. valuables
3. an indelible memory
1. (Don't know)
2. valuables
3. an indelible memory
1. I was too shocked to react.
2. valuables
3. an indelible memory
-Huixin
1.I was too schocked to react
2.valuables
3.
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