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Interesting piece. Writer was able to sustain the reader's interest with fast paced development of events and a surprising twist in the end. Quite a few spelling mistakes to correct.
1. my father than apologised to the man
2. my father then retrieved his particulars.
3. decibles
4. inocent
5. mastered up the courage
6.murmed
7. hillarious
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1. my father then apologised to the man
3. decibels
4. innocent
5. mustered up the courage
6. murmured
7. hilarious
3. decibels
4. innocent
5. mustered up the courage
6.murmured
7. hilarious
1. my father apologised to the man.
2. my father retrieved his particulars.
3. decibels
4. innocent
5. mustered up the courage
6. murmured
7. hilarious
1. Then, my father apologised to the man
2. Then, my father retrieved his particulars.
3. decibels
4. innocent
5. maustered up the courage
6. murmured
7. hilarious
1. my father then apologised to the man.
2. Then, my father retrieved his particulars.
3. decibels
4. innocent
5. mustered up the courage
6. murmured
7. hilarious
-my father then apologised to the man.
-Then, my father retrieved his particulars.
-decibels
-innocent
-mustered up the courage
-murmured
-hilarious
1.My father then apologised to the man
3.decibels
4.innocent
5.mustered up the courage
6.mummured
7.hilarious
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