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1. Laying in a sprawl, legs and arms in contorted position.
2. After the ambulance left, what remained on the road was spots of blood and smitereens of glass.
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1. lying in a sprawl, legs and arms in contorted position.
2. After the ambulance left, what remained on the road were spots of blood and smithereens of glass.
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1. lying in a sprawl, legs and arms in contorted position.
2. After the ambulance had left, what remained on the road were spots of blood and broken shards of glass.
Smithereens-Fragments or splintered pieces
1. Lying in a sprawl, legs and arms in contorted position.
2. After the ambulance left, what remained on the road was spots of blood and smithereens of glass.
1. lying in a sprawl, legs and arms in a contorted position.
2. after the ambulance left,what remained on the road were patches of blood and little shards of glass
1.lying in sprawl,legs and arms in contorted position.
2.after the ambulance left,what remained on the road were spots of blood and smithereens of shattered glass.
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