Good piece but too many careless mistakes.
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1. My palms were turning cold and clammy.
2. acted promptly
1. It a fine Sunday morning.
2. just few blocks away
3. persperation
4. Come hear quick
5. Being Advantgerous girls
6. curiousity
7. one of the man
8. The taller man stated to drive the car.
9. foehead
10.we were brought to a dark room.
11. pratical
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3 comments:
1)It is a fine Sunday morning.
2)just a few block away.
3)perspiration
4)come here quick
5)Being Adventurous girls
6)curiosity
7)one of the men
8)the taller man started to drive the car.
9)forehead
11)piratical
2. just a few blocks away
11. practical
1. It was a fine Sunday morning.
2. only a few blocks away
3. perspiration
4. "Hurry,come over here!"
5. being an adventurous girl
6. curiosity
7. one of the men
8. The taller man started to drive the car
9. forehead
10. we were taken to a dark room
11. practical
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