Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Grammar check

1. one of my favourite hobby
2. both said in union
3. Where is it you saw that bird?
4. asked eagerily
5. everyone frozed
6. a flammingo
7. How can a flammingo appears around here?
8. oblivious to it's surrounding
9. I saw it flew towards here.
10. one of the men said and complaint.
11. It's heavy carrying all this birds.
12. I explains.
13. We rised from the bushes.
14. surrounding the two man
15. How a eventful day!

3 comments:

Unknown said...

1. one of my favorite hobbies
2. both said in unison
3. where did you see that bird?
4. asked eagerly
5. a flamingo
7. how can a flamingo appear around here?
8. oblivious to its surrounding
9. I saw it fly towards here
10. one of the men complain(ed
11. It’s very heavy carrying all these birds
12. I explain(ed
13. We rose from the bushes
14. surrounding the two men
15. what an eventful day!
By: LYB (Yuan Bin)

Anonymous said...

1. one of my favourite hobbies
2. both said in unision
3. Where did you see the bird?
4. asked eagerly
5. everyone froze
6. a flamingo
7. How can a flamingo appear around here?
8. oblivious to its surrounding
9. I saw it fly towards here.
10. one of the men said and complained
11. It's heavy carrying all these birds.
12. I explained
13. We rose from the bushes.
14. surrounding the two men
15. What an eventful day!

fong wei deng said...

1.one of my favourites
2.both said in unisn
3.Where did you see that bird
4.asked eagerly
5.everyone froze
6.a flamingo
7.how can a flamingo appear here?
8.oblivious to its surrounding
9.I saw it fly towards here
10.one of the men complain(ed)
11.It's very heavy carrying all these birds
12.I explain
13.We rose from the bushes
14.surrounding the two men
15.What an eventful day!