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Needs to be more specific and vivid in your expression.
1. check out the stuff behind the bush
2. A flying squirrel was on the ground lay there motionless.
3. an early morning exercise became a morning squirrel rescue.
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6 comments:
1)check out the stuffs behind the bushes.
2)a flying squirrel wa on the ground laying there motionless
Try again.
1.checked out the stuff behind the bush
2.A flying squirrel lay on the ground, motionless.
3.an early morning exercise became a treatment at the clinic for an injured.
1. to find out what was behind the bushes.
2. Laying there on the ground motionless was a flying squarrel.
3. exercising that morning benefited as rescuing a flying squarrel.
1. checked out the stuff behind the bushes
2.a flying squirrel was on the ground, laying motionlessly.(motionless squirrel called flying squirrel???)
1. checked out the stuff behind the bush
2. A plying squirrel was lying there on the ground, motionless.
3. Exercising that morning benefited as rescuing a flying squarrel.
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