Good effort put in. Keep it up.
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1. a rustling noise
2. an animal shelter
1. staring at the puppies mouth wide agape
2. When he came back, uncle had arrived.
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2)when he came back, his uncle has arrived
Nope...
1. staring at the puppies, with his mouth wide agape
1. staring at the wide agaped mouth of the puppies
2. When he came, his uncle was there.
his mouth wide agape as he stared at the puppies.
when he come back, uncle has arrived
1. He stared at the puppies with his mouth wide agape.
2. When he came back, his uncle had already arrived.
1. He stared at the puppies with his mouth wide agape.
2. When he came back, his uncle had arrived.
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