Thursday, April 2, 2009

Creative-Writing: Plane Crash

A troop of helicopters came hovering above. A sparkle of hope kindled.

After what seemed like eternity, all was not yet lost. Survivors were ferried safely to the ground. The ordeal was over. Hundreds of people were saved from death and injury.

Soon, the ambulance arrived . The paramedics got off the ambulance and rendered first aid to the victims. Tears coursed freely down cheeks. The wrecked aircraft sank into the water. The survivors mourned the loss of innocent lives. Their hearts filled with sorrow.

John and his cousins were saved but John's mother was still missing.

Contributed by Tricia Lim Yun Qi
Class of 6-9 2009

1 comment:

aw hwee hean said...

Tricia lim yun qi, i see that you had made use of the phrases our tution centre gave. Good for you as you are able to use the phrases properly. By:Aw hwee hean