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The basic structure of a story is evident. Writer now has to work on adding more details to every idea so that he can paint a more vivid picture in his readers' minds.
Mistakes
1. unexpecldly
2. sticked out her walking stick
3. blarring
4. in the mean time
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1. unexpectedly
2. stuck out her walking stick
3. blaring
4. *got problem?*
1. unexpectedly
2. stuck out her walking stick
3. blaring
4. in the meantime
1. unexpectedly
2. stuck out her walking stick
3. blaring
4. in the meantime
-unexpectedly
-stuck out her walking stick
-blaring
-in the meantime
1.unexpectedly
2.stuck out her walking stick
3.blaring
4.in the meantime,
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