C 15 L 14
Writer's writing skills have shown significant improvement with ideas adequately developed and appropriate use of vocabulary.
1. impending danger
2. groaned in excruciating pain
3. aggravate the pain
Mistakes
1. He felt unconscious and run through the sea of faces around him.
2. he black out
3. did not realised
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2. he blacked out.
3. did not realise
1. He felt unconscious and ran through the sea of faces around him.
2. he blacked out
3. did not realise
1. He ran through the sea of faces around him and felt unconscious.
2. He blacked out.
3. did not realise
Tricia Lim
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