Sunday, June 7, 2009

CW feedback - Christabel's writing

C 12 L 8

The composition is flawed by the number of language mistakes and awkward sentence structures. Writer also wrote about jail terms which is discouraged. Direct speech is not used.

1. did not saw
2. it was learnt that if you drink you should not drive.

2 comments:

Qian Wei said...

1. did not see
2. it was learnt that we should not drink before driving.

Shirley said...

1.Did not see
2.It was learnt that you should not drive after drinking.