C17 L17
A novel-like story woven with good vocabulary. The piece shows writer's sharp observation in things happening around him. Writer could have put the highlight on the thief rather than the angry customer and the novice waitress.
Good vocab
1. an aroma of strong coffee and freshly brewed tea wafted across the coffee shop
2. bustling business
3. oppressively hot
4. scrambled to take down their orders
5. laden with beer bottles and porcelain cups of coffee
6. berate
7. carted the thief off
Mistakes
1. hesistation
2. dailled
3. skillful
4. pespiring
5. eating & drinking
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1. hesitation
2. dialled/dialed
4. perspiring
5. eating and drinking
Mistakes
1. hesitation
2. dialed
3. skilful
4. perspiring
5. eating and drinking
1. hesitation
2. dialled/dial
3. (no problem)
4. perspiring
1. hesitation
2. dialed
3. (no idea)
4. perspiring
5. eating and drinking
1. hesitation
2. dialled / dialed
3. skilful
4. perspiring
5. eating and drinking
1. hesitation
2. dialled
3. skillful
4. perspiring
5. having a meal
1. hesitation
2. dialled/dialed
3. skillful
4. perspiring
5. eating and drinking
-Huixin
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