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Writer has made improvement in his language and is able to express his ideas quite well. It is now time to work on substantiating the ideas.
1. It was mum's birthday
2. to informed
3. When dad saw it, He quicky chased after the thief.
4. The luck lady was not on his side.
5. The police officer thanked dad and brought the man to the police station.
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1. it was mum birthday
2. to inform
3. when dad saw it, he quickly chase after the thief.
4. lady luck was not on his side.
5. the police officer thanks dad and brought the thief to the police station.
1. it was my mother's birthday
2. to inform
3. When my father saw it, he quickly chased after the thief
4. Lady luck was not on his side.
5. The officer thanked my father and brought the man to the police station.
1.it was my mother's birthday
2.to inform
3.when my father saw it,he quickly chase after the thief.
4.Lady luck was not not on his side.
5.the police officer thanked my father and bring the thief back to the police station.
-it was my mother's birthday
-to inform
-When my father saw it, he quickly chased after the thief
-Lady luck was not on his side.
-The officer thanked my father and brought the man to the police station
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